Runaway Love <3

Runaway Love <3

445 Reads 13 Votes 3 Part Story
lj By lj-allstar20 Updated Mar 28, 2011

I was 13  years old when i was kidnapped. I have been stuck being a slave and forceing my self through each painfull day ever since. Then He came......as soon as i saw master drag him in his house, i knew i would hate him with all my heart. But maybe i was wrong..........

shelbylw03 shelbylw03 Mar 08, 2011
Awesome prologue! You had a couple of spelling errors but they weren't major. Your grammar was good and you caught my attention from the beginning. Voted.
Britta Britta Mar 08, 2011
Oh my gosh! i wonder why they got kidnapped by that awful man! Ahh!
                              I believe this is a good start wanting readers to know what happens next xD
                              keep up the good work :)
                              Voted!!
                              
                              Britta.xx