Relentless

Relentless

375 Reads 3 Votes 3 Part Story
Daphne Danielle By DaniiRawwr Updated May 20, 2011

Ian West is alone and miserable walking through the crowded halls of East Green High. Each day is torture, and the facade he wears everyday is beginning to break. After one last "innocent prank" is pulled, Ian finally breaks and something inside him snaps. He want's revenge on every last person that has ever hurt him or looked away while he was constantly victimized, and he's determined he will get it. Can Ian surpass even the darkest and most cruel things his tormenters inflicted on him without losing himself, or will he once again fall victim to the people he’s sought out to destroy?

DaniiRawwr DaniiRawwr May 03, 2011
Wow, I've not been on in forever, with my laptop being broken I didn't see the use, I think I almost forgot about this story! But the good news is I'm back, and ready to write some more! Thank you fo your comments!!
roseylee roseylee Apr 05, 2011
It's beautifully written indeed. It gets me curious for more, and the pain of the main character is written out so well. I wonder what they've done to Ian..