Doll Songs

Doll Songs

4K Reads 102 Votes 10 Part Story
Jae-Lynn Rawr By NahDeesession Updated Jan 07, 2012

The little one with the blue eyes and the other with the blond hair lay lifeless at there killers feet. She did much more than  kill and torture. She was going to put them in her song box were there souls would go. "Goodbye!" She sang dancing around her possessions. If she could kill the next Chosen one before another two were picked she would rule the world. There was no stopping.

TeresaLindero TeresaLindero Apr 02, 2012
If this isn't scary I'm scared to read on... But I will cuz its super really amazing
BreeTheBritishChic BreeTheBritishChic Apr 23, 2011
Absoulutely amazing! I've been looking for a horror novel for  long time and here you come with a beautifully written one. Thank you! I have one little critique  in the beginning of the novel the doll's name is Tusumi, while at the end her name is Tatsumi. That's it. Love it.
Thischickisbomb Thischickisbomb Mar 11, 2011
This is scary lol, if this isn't scary to you yet, i wonde rwhat it will be like in the future
Saiya1 Saiya1 Mar 05, 2011
I like it!   It's creepy, and on the verge of scariness. Yes, you're missing a few punctuations, ut other than that it's great! 
MaskedAuthor MaskedAuthor Mar 05, 2011
It's really amazing. I love the unique idea of using songs that you would have sang as a child in it :). I'm not a fan of horror though. I'm a huge scaredy cat deep inside. It's really good though!
HeatherMcCorkle HeatherMcCorkle Mar 05, 2011
Great concept. I love the creepy element and couldn't stop reading! Voted!