The Next Life - Part 1

The Next Life - Part 1

1.1K Reads 21 Votes 9 Part Story
Benji Radtke By BenjiRadtke Updated Jul 03, 2012

The world is moving on.  Will humanity move on with it, or will the planet decide it's had enough of us.  One man is going to find out if survival is still a possibility, or like many before us, that our species has run it's course.

Hooha84 Hooha84 Jul 07, 2012
Hi there! I have to say that I really enjoy your writing style. It keeps the writer wanting to see what happens next. I try to do that at it the end of my chapters as well. I look forward to reading more.
BenjiRadtke BenjiRadtke Jul 03, 2012
@01pretty689 I'm glad you enjoy it so far!  I try to end each part in suspense, I will do my best to not let you down! :)
01pretty689 01pretty689 Jul 03, 2012
I'm not in to these kind of stories but I actually like how it's starting off. I also love how you ended with a climax!
BenjiRadtke BenjiRadtke Jul 03, 2012
@Dempsey Thank you for the comment!  I will try not to let the suspense falter as the story goes on :)!
Dempsey Dempsey Jul 03, 2012
I absolutely love the way you build up the tension before the attack of the bear, very will written and i only wish this chapter was longer. You story has got my attention and is going on the reading list :D
BenjiRadtke BenjiRadtke Jul 02, 2012
@jacamat Thank you!  I originally thought Werebear was a bit cheesy, but as the story progressed, I liked the name more and more, so I kept it :).