Turning Point: A Star Wars Story

Turning Point: A Star Wars Story

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SapphireAlena By SapphireAlena Updated 2 days ago

[WATTYS2018 LONGLIST!]
[FEATURED AUGUST-SEPTEMBER 2018]

Editor: @MichaelHoliday 

For the first time since the Battle of Endor, the Ewoks have invited the Republic back to their tiny moon to celebrate Independence Day. Much of the Republic delight at the chance to visit this proscribed location that was the turning point in the Rebellion.

The Ewoks have sent missives across the galaxy to all tribal members. Reuniting the wayward tribe proves difficult: Luke's wife Naluma is about to deliver their first child, Han and Chewie are on a "trading mission" for dubious clients, and Leia is protecting a young girl from a great evil in the galaxy. 

The youngest member of the tribe, Ben Solo, struggles with his parents' separation, the injuries sustained on a training mission months earlier, and the burgeoning darkness within him.

But a Force-ghost has been manipulating the proceedings, bringing his family together once again on Endor. 

Is he in time to save his lost grandson?

And who's the girl?

AU Star Wars story seventeen years after Return of the Jedi.
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I do not own Disney or Lucasfilm. The characters Princess Leia, Han Solo, Chewbacca, C-3PO, R2-D2, Anakin Skywalker, Luke Skywalker, Ben Solo, Rey, all the creatures, and Endor are the property of Disney/Lucasfilm. I make no money from this work.

Naluma and everyone else and the Jedi Academy on Khalkha are mine. 

No portion of this story may be copied, transmitted, or used for other creative works without written permission of the author. All rights reserved. Copyright 2018 S. A. McCaffrey.  (Wattpad username: @SapphireAlena)

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Arveliot Arveliot Aug 14
Aha!
                              
                              Here’s where we get a bit of movie Ben coming out. That anger, that rage he doesn’t even consider restraining, there’s a lot of movie resonance in this paragraph.
AleWolfric AleWolfric Aug 31
Interesting story, I would continue following its course, I invite you to read mine, thank you!
xDRAG0N0VAx xDRAG0N0VAx Jul 28
Since I'm coming in new, it was quite a shock reading that Ben can't walk right now. But you played on the Darkness in him well where he practically jumped out of his chair to attack the Padawan.  
                              
                              (I know I'm two-weeks late to start reading and commenting, but better late than never, right?)
BillRuesch BillRuesch Sep 01
To me some of your sentences could be rearranged. I would suggest a period instead of a comma after ‘darkness’.
BillRuesch BillRuesch Sep 01
Maybe, The opening of the door caused the wafting of her long Jedi robes. Just a thought.
Arveliot Arveliot Aug 14
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                              I’m having a hard time visualizing someone leaning on a safety rail while having their hands on their hips.