Turning Point: A Star Wars Story

Turning Point: A Star Wars Story

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SapphireAlena By SapphireAlena Updated Nov 30, 2018

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[FEATURED AUGUST-SEPTEMBER 2018]

Editor: @MichaelHoliday 

For the first time since the Battle of Endor, the Ewoks have invited the Republic back to their tiny moon to celebrate Independence Day. Much of the Republic delight at the chance to visit this proscribed location that was the turning point in the Rebellion.

The Ewoks have sent missives across the galaxy to all tribal members. Reuniting the wayward tribe proves difficult: Luke's wife Naluma is about to deliver their first child, Han and Chewie are on a "trading mission" for dubious clients, and Leia is protecting a young girl from a great evil in the galaxy. 

The youngest member of the tribe, Ben Solo, struggles with his parents' separation, the injuries sustained on a training mission months earlier, and the burgeoning darkness within him.

But a Force-ghost has been manipulating the proceedings, bringing his family together once again on Endor. 

Is he in time to save his lost grandson?

And who's the girl?

AU Star Wars story seventeen years after Return of the Jedi.
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I do not own Disney or Lucasfilm. The characters Princess Leia, Han Solo, Chewbacca, C-3PO, R2-D2, Anakin Skywalker, Luke Skywalker, Ben Solo, Rey, all the creatures, and Endor are the property of Disney/Lucasfilm. I make no money from this work.

Naluma and everyone else and the Jedi Academy on Khalkha are mine. 

No portion of this story may be copied, transmitted, or used for other creative works without written permission of the author. All rights reserved. Copyright 2018 S. A. McCaffrey.  (Wattpad username: @SapphireAlena)

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Quiet_Pen Quiet_Pen Nov 25, 2018
Like who does even braid the Jedis' hairs that they seem to be all the same. I bet they have a lowkey hairstyler hired 😂😂
Quiet_Pen Quiet_Pen Nov 25, 2018
 #NBR 🐣 . I don't know if this counts as an easter egg, but I like the allusion of darkness greeting Ben. It shows that evil is just really lurking around the corner, trying to pull in Ben.
KellyJBurke KellyJBurke Nov 24, 2018
 #NBR
                              
                              I wonder if splitting the last sentence up would work better. I feel like mentioning his mood separately may give it more punch.
                              
                              "He welcomed the blackness after racing through the blinding sunlight. It matched his dark mood."
queen_of_sass queen_of_sass Nov 21, 2018
 #NBR 
                              
                              The only thing I know in this universe is the saber and that's because I hit a guy in his private parts when I was playing with his toy blue saber 😂😂.
Quiet_Pen Quiet_Pen Nov 25, 2018
Nice! I like the tension here. The darkness is prepared to do its job 😏.
queen_of_sass queen_of_sass Nov 21, 2018
 #NBR I personally feel this thought feels displaced and made me confused a bit. I think it can be omitted