Rejected

Rejected

8.9K Reads 170 Votes 3 Part Story
RITCHEL By mybubble652 Updated Apr 27, 2011

Abandoned when she was little, Addie Greene had to learn how to defend herself, to do so she had to become a fighter, a street fighter to be exact. Now she’s 17 and she got accepted into one of the most expensive schools in the state. Addie thought it was a change for the better…she was dead wrong.
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    fydxchris fydxchris Apr 26, 2015
    I'm confused what exactly is their relationship ? Brother and sister or something?
    ACRL37 ACRL37 Apr 27, 2011
    i think this is really good!! keep up the good work! =D *voted
    mybubble652 mybubble652 Apr 19, 2011
    @GenXblogger 
                                  thanks XD
                                  My editor hasnt edited yet but it will be :) 
                                  and can you please tell me what a run on sentance iss? Is it like a very long sentance?
                                  But thanks so much! It means alot for you to comment XD
    GenXblogger GenXblogger Apr 19, 2011
    Pros: Nice story idea, a little different. Good character voice! 
                                  
                                  Issues: spelling (like tattoo)  and run on sentences (but not tons)
                                  
                                  Over all nice first chapter! 
    holley342 holley342 Mar 07, 2011
    @mybubble652 no prob I'm going to literally vote on each chapter =]
    mybubble652 mybubble652 Mar 06, 2011
    @holley342 thanks u sooo much for your help and voting and fanning it means ALOT!