ELDORADO- *On hold*

ELDORADO- *On hold*

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aarya By aarya_lovesDragons Updated Jul 06, 2012

WHEN HISTORY,MYSTERY,LOVE STORY COMBINE WITH A TINGE OF MAGIC it brews up a deadly cocktail like this one...

DrSocks DrSocks Aug 20, 2013 01:21AM
very cool idea :) just some cleaning up, grammar and stuff and it should be great! i really like the idea.
                                    
                                    keep writing!
its a good start. love the Inheritence cycle and i'm sure i'm going to love this too. voted!
@AmaLie91 heyy thanks loads :) i appreciate your comment . Once i am done putting up few more chapters will ask someone to help edit it for me :)
                                    i completely understand bout life being in a mess... its the same here because of which it took me this long to reply sorry !
@LessThanThree_ Thats all right rely :) glad u liked it :) and as for the errors will have to find a person to edit it...:) so once i finish at least 20 chapters will ask someone to help me edit :)
Good beginning, just need to straighten out the creases and it should be perfect :D love the idea and it's very original xx
@Not_so_unique_name you :) and yup i love inheritance cycle :) and the name aarya is special for me :) ;)