They say sometimes you need some alone time, I never understood that till now. Now I realize I should also bring my phone with me.
maybe you can add periods and quotation marks?? Just a suggestion :))
why in all kidnapping stories it is some person tie to a chair?!?
I think that magcon shouldn't be the ones kidnapping her. I just hate it when my idols are the bad guys!
I think that you shouldn't have magcon kidnap her. Maybe they could be kidnapped WITH her or save her or something.
have her be a slave or she ends up staying there and falls in love with um..Matt and they live happily ever after
OMG have it be they like rape her and bully her then it goes to like 2 or 3 years later when they create magcon and then she goes to magcon and realizes it's them and they try to be friends with her and they try to gain her trust but she ends up falling for one of the guys