FLOOD

FLOOD

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Erin Latimer By ELatimer Completed

*completed*The Jotun have been fighting amongst themselves for centuries. But now Valka, a young servant from the ice palace, is about to discover a new and terrible enemy has arisen.

Note: FLOOD is a stand-alone book set in the Jotun world. It is not book 2 of the Frost series (that will be published by Patchwork Press later this year).

Cover art by @SeventhStar

I KNOW HOW. Maybe. Just a theory. They caught a joutn and tortured in for out of it. Injected some of their blood into them self so they would be able to get through the pass and started kidnapping joutn!
A comma by itself  is not enough to separate independent clauses like this. I probably sound nit-picky, and I'm sorry for that.
Why not say "the woods became" and cut out some unnecessary words. This story seems to have the words "was" and "were" in it far more often than necessary.
I love it when writers know the difference between farther and further. Good for you!
I think he may be one of those dudes with the water powers???
                              
                              
                              I Dunnp don't kill me for my bad guess
Does anyone think of the Fire and Ice poem or is it just me?