FLOOD

FLOOD

926K Reads 63.5K Votes 48 Part Story
Erin Latimer By ELatimer Completed

*completed*The Jotun have been fighting amongst themselves for centuries. But now Valka, a young servant from the ice palace, is about to discover a new and terrible enemy has arisen.

Note: FLOOD is a stand-alone book set in the Jotun world. It is not book 2 of the Frost series (that will be published by Patchwork Press later this year).

Cover art by @SeventhStar

abhitastic7 abhitastic7 Feb 07
COVER ARTWORK BY SEVENTH STAR. WHY DOWSNT IS SAY SEVENTH STAR.
JoyNelson480 JoyNelson480 Nov 02, 2016
A comma by itself  is not enough to separate independent clauses like this. I probably sound nit-picky, and I'm sorry for that.
JoyNelson480 JoyNelson480 Nov 02, 2016
Why not say "the woods became" and cut out some unnecessary words. This story seems to have the words "was" and "were" in it far more often than necessary.
JoyNelson480 JoyNelson480 Nov 02, 2016
I love it when writers know the difference between farther and further. Good for you!
First of all, yeah, I do kinda think that. Whoever tries to kidnap my Valka, or my Jess, or my Megan. Second of all, it's not WATERPROOF, is it? From the title, I'm guessing Valka has some sort of control over water...or something.
randomdew randomdew Feb 16
Wait so animals talk? Or is it just the wolves?? Or is it just him??