The Guardian's of Exodiux *I am currently under maintenance of revising*

The Guardian's of Exodiux *I am currently under maintenance of revising*

2.3K Reads 43 Votes 11 Part Story
Khristian Peterson By khris1400 Updated Jun 11, 2011

Raiku is a regular high schooler, until he goes to the principle's office for something stupid. He then finds himself attacked by silver-bird monsters, Ino, his best friend (maybe more than that) was there to.After defeating the monster himself, he finds out he's a Zwielt with the ability to use black flames, there are 4 more as well. The only thing wrong is if Exodiux dies (Exodiux is the person or god, the Zwielt are suppose to protect) then the whole world will go into chaos. While protecting Exodiux from his evil brothers, the Zwielt also protect there life becuase they would die with Exodiux.

XxChaoticTeddiexX XxChaoticTeddiexX May 27, 2011
You did a great job Khris and you got me hooked on this genre of books. I usually dont read stuff like this. It's great! ♥
khris1400 khris1400 May 22, 2011
@peculiarpianist um i believe you've already commented on this dude
- - May 21, 2011
I agree with sperare. Also, all CAPS HURTS PEOPLE'S EYES! And you might want to tone down the swearing, that can turn readers off very quickly.
khris1400 khris1400 May 21, 2011
Yeah the chapter has grammer but the other chapters are way better :)
RandomSoul RandomSoul May 21, 2011
i Voted :D , my first ever fantasy book i've ever read and i think i'm going to try a few more now :D
sperare sperare May 21, 2011
Just watch your grammer. And revise it. Like: "What wrong!?" I think you meant to put "What's wrong?!"