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Should I be afraid? (To be REWRITTEN & RENAMED!)

Should I be afraid? (To be REWRITTEN & RENAMED!)

1.1K Reads 35 Votes 2 Part Story
Nikki By punkinpie36 Updated May 30, 2011

This story is in the midst of being completely redone.  It will continue to be a teen/ realistic fiction, but it is still debatable whether or not the story will develop into a series.

Want2BLoved Want2BLoved Sep 25, 2011
Wow.. Honestly, that was a little difficult to read. Too many run-ons and grammatical errors. Good start, but needs to be edited.
punkinpie36 punkinpie36 Jul 29, 2011
@TheVampiress Thanks. and thanks for pointing out the mistakes
TheVampiress TheVampiress Jul 27, 2011
Good job! Some run on sentences and you said "theirs" instead of "there's."
banapple banapple Dec 31, 2010
I think that its very interesting and It makes me want to read on. good job and keep it up! ;D
punkinpie36 punkinpie36 Dec 23, 2010
Thanks and I will shorten my sentences for sure and I will work on everything else you told me I should do becuase i appericate people giving me advice on how to make my stories better!
punkinpie36 punkinpie36 Dec 13, 2010
please comment and tell me what you think. please dont forget to corret me if i made any mistakes like punctuion, run on sentences or any thing. Also tell me if I should continue writting this story! please.
                                          comment and enjoy
                                           Sincerely, Punkinpie