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caseyyyy. By xdaydreamer Updated Apr 08, 2013

In high-school stereotypes, Greta would be labeled a "Goth." Every day she gets up and puts pounds of dark make-up and baggy clothes on, in an attempt to mask herself. She sees herself as horribly ugly, worthless, and an embarassment to her family. When Jason Adams, the star quaterback and popular guy, starts helping Greta's little brother, Austin, with football he can't help but wonder why she is the way she is. He tries to help her overcome her insecurites and learn her story.

fallingtopieces fallingtopieces Jun 23, 2011
I really want to see how this story unfolds! Please don't leave us hanging at this point! I really like how you introduced Austin to the story, and his interest in Greta. Please continue with this story, I really want to read more from you. :)
whisperedxmemories whisperedxmemories May 01, 2011
i just want to stop by and say.... you have an online stranger stalking you everyday to see if a new chapter comes out :D
                              Hope that I can read it ASAP, but notice the "as possible" part, cause life is hectic, so... all i can do is wait in anticipation.. :)))
whisperedxmemories whisperedxmemories Apr 28, 2011
Honestly looking forward and cant wait for the next chapter :))