Born and Died of Royalty

Born and Died of Royalty

240 Reads 7 Votes 1 Part Story
Kat By Kittehkatya Completed

a tale of a Mer, a longing, and an epic battle.

HeatherMcCorkle HeatherMcCorkle Mar 12, 2011
This has a wonderful, lyrical rhythm like an old time fairy tale and yet still manages to sound fresh. I love that about it! 
champsissy champsissy Mar 09, 2011
Okay, I like this. It's interesting. However, readers like action instead of endless detail and can be intimidating by just looking at it. I do enjoy how you wrote it like a bedtime story, and the same with the synopsis. There's just enough detail to draw the read in. Keep writing!
Kittehkatya Kittehkatya Mar 03, 2011
Please comment and tell me what you think... This is my first story so I'm a little nervous about it
                                 Thanx
                                     -Kat