a tale of a Mer, a longing, and an epic battle.
This has a wonderful, lyrical rhythm like an old time fairy tale and yet still manages to sound fresh. I love that about it!
Okay, I like this. It's interesting. However, readers like action instead of endless detail and can be intimidating by just looking at it. I do enjoy how you wrote it like a bedtime story, and the same with the synopsis. There's just enough detail to draw the read in. Keep writing!
Please comment and tell me what you think... This is my first story so I'm a little nervous about it