Fallen Hope

Fallen Hope

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Nicole By khstar Updated May 24, 2012

What fascinates people about vampires? Could it be their beauty? Or their mysteriousness? Perhaps it’s the way they talk or move? Maybe it's his ice blue eyes, or his jet black hair, or his perfect teeth, or maybe just maybe they have met before...
Mesaine Deromeo is a strange girl; she lives in a popular enough city, has an endless amount of money, an apartment building to herself, and no memory of how she came to be here. She knows how things like the television works, but she also knows that she has never before seen one.
Could it be these strange facts that draw in a vampire?

khstar khstar Mar 12, 2011
@LotsaLuv Thank You!!! ^^ Actually i came up with that name years ago! I don't even remember how i came up with it *_* my friend makes fun of her though and calls her Desanie like the water =_=
LotsaLuv LotsaLuv Mar 12, 2011
Really good :) Defiantly fanning. I love the name you chose for her. It's a very different name but not something so weird you would never hear of it. Good job!
CarlThomas CarlThomas Mar 02, 2011
There are posts on the forums offering help with editing. Not sure which sections. You'd have to look at the groups I'm joined to and find them that way. They're on the right hand side of my profile. Good luck.  
khstar khstar Mar 02, 2011
@CarlThomas Thank you! I actually only speak english >.< i need to seriously edit my stuff then, maybe i could find a friend to be my editor YD