The Faintest Ink (Watty Winner 2015)

The Faintest Ink (Watty Winner 2015)

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Winner of a Watty Award, 2015!

In Serrador, your name is your greatest vulnerability. Those with one suffer under a regime of magic and absolute control, while those without are forced to live on the fringes of society.

When four unlikely rebels manage to sneak into the Citadel and assassinate the King, his tyrannical rule is ended. But with the Princess on the run, and the King of Pryvia threatening war, it will take more than idealism to keep the peace in Serrador.

The King is dead... Long live the revolution!

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PelhamK PelhamK Apr 24
I'm not sure if I'm reading this wrong or my IQ dropped 40 points but I don't understand this line? Even after reading before and after, I'm just having trouble understanding.
PelhamK PelhamK Apr 24
I'm curious to know how many drafts of this paragraph you had? I'm a bit of a perfectionist so it would have taken multiple revisions. Did you work on it for a while or possibly leave it and come back to it?
vixened vixened Sep 29, 2016
Jeez, people. Color for Americans, colour for British citizens. It's not that hard to remember. Brush up on your own vocabulary.
fandom_loverr fandom_loverr Nov 20, 2016
Am I the only one that when first seeing the book cover the big S snake thingy, on it reminded them of shrek
West_YW West_YW Jun 21, 2016
Interesting beginning. I like the characters so far, looking forwards to the rest of the story.
Blackdragon70 Blackdragon70 Jul 11, 2016
This is some great writing! I'd appreciate some feedback on mine so that I know how to improve