Perles of Creo

Perles of Creo

521 Reads 10 Votes 5 Part Story
Nina By nil11nina Updated Mar 31, 2011

The intelligent and strategic Perles has many talents a corrupt democratic government could use. However, after a failed assassination plot, Perles is thrown into a world of would-be terrorists, "witches" and politics, where everyone is a pawn in his hands...

nil11nina nil11nina Apr 22, 2011
That was a friend of mine, logged in on my account (: not me (:
nil11nina nil11nina Apr 20, 2011
go on with the story. It is a faszinating start of  story which promises a lot of dramatic development. Rosebud
nil11nina nil11nina Mar 12, 2011
Thank you!! 
                              Im glad you saw he's supposed to be an ass sometimes!
nebelsaengerin nebelsaengerin Mar 12, 2011
Cherry pie :) How cute. 
                              I really do love your main character, but I think he's an ass about 1/4th of the time.
                              Also the voice is a nice invention, although I would have it comment on the last page (for example when Perles doesn't expect May's actions)
nebelsaengerin nebelsaengerin Mar 09, 2011
Wow!
                              next to the fact, the writing style is amazing, you story is also enticing, and makes me want to know exactly what happens next.
                              (Just make sure you touch up some of the phrasing (yes i am totally nit-picky :D )
                              I hope you post again soon!
                              Good luck XD