I Told Him (Wattys 2014)

I Told Him (Wattys 2014)

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late dawns & early sunsets By coldstarlight Completed

She told him not to do it but he took his life anyway. Told in free-verse poetry with sparse limerick/rhyming qualities, you don't know their names, but you'll forever remember their story. #Wattys2014

lovelivelife1621 lovelivelife1621 Jul 31, 2016
Did you not write the words because then it would be real enough to send its message?
SapphireRocks_14 SapphireRocks_14 Jan 07, 2016
This is the first time in reading it and in happy that a guy's insecurity is being shown unlike the others stories. But then again this is very sad
lostprabin lostprabin Dec 23, 2015
Nice poem..however I couldn't find out what he did? Did you refer to his dying?
attrist attrist Dec 12, 2015
I already feel like crying. This is breathtakingly beautiful
- - Nov 24, 2015
me likey ancient greek references. me think of percy jackson, me think of percabteh, me go happy
Rat_Fanclub Rat_Fanclub Nov 21, 2015
Oh my gosh this is the most beautiful thing I have ever read