I Told Him (Wattys 2014)

I Told Him (Wattys 2014)

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late dawns & early sunsets By coldstarlight Completed

She told him not to do it but he took his life anyway. Told in free-verse poetry with sparse limerick/rhyming qualities, you don't know their names, but you'll forever remember their story. #Wattys2014

  • death
  • enough
  • him
  • hurt
  • icarus
  • lost
  • love
  • suicidal
  • suicide
  • taken
  • tragedy
  • tragic
  • wattys2014
SManapuri SManapuri Jan 07
This is actually really cool, with the poems and stuff, and it’s pretty deep
lovelivelife1621 lovelivelife1621 Jul 31, 2016
Did you not write the words because then it would be real enough to send its message?
SapphireRocks_14 SapphireRocks_14 Jan 07, 2016
This is the first time in reading it and in happy that a guy's insecurity is being shown unlike the others stories. But then again this is very sad
lostprabin lostprabin Dec 23, 2015
Nice poem..however I couldn't find out what he did? Did you refer to his dying?
attrist attrist Dec 12, 2015
I already feel like crying. This is breathtakingly beautiful
- - Nov 24, 2015
me likey ancient greek references. me think of percy jackson, me think of percabteh, me go happy