The Academy of the Jade Blades

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Daezy By CrazyDaezy Updated 3 years ago
The Academy of the Jade Blades is where Daisy Simone now lives with her foster dad, Master Kenn, and his two sons, Kyo and Siman. After years of depression and the feeling of being alone, Daisy finds her comfort in sword fighting and eventually travels to the top of her class, earning her the nickname "Amazon". But as horomones and emotions fly so close to graduation, will any of her feelings last? Also, when Kyo starts seeing her as more than just a fun and flirty friend, will their love last long enough to live past graduation? Love, fights, loyalties, and lies all have settled deep into the Academy of the Jade Blades.
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                                    Thanks for the critique! I haven't written a lot of perfect stories, and I'm only fourteen so they'll be a lot of mistakes, but I'm working as hard as I can! I love writing, and I don't want to do anything else in my life! Critiquing helps me build more knowledge to become a better writer, so your honest opnion is helping me a lot! Thank you so much!
@Equanimity Thank you! I do hope you continue with Dear Mommy! I loved it, and can't wait for another upload! It's freaking awesome! 
                                    
                                    Thanks for the critique! I haven't written a lot of perfect stories, and I'm only fourteen so they'll be a lot of mistakes, but I'm working as hard as I can! I love writing, and I don't want to do anything else in my life! Critiquing helps me build more knowledge to become a better writer, so your honest opnion is helping me a lot! Thank you so much!
@Equanimity Thank you! I do hope you continue with Dear Mommy! I loved it, and can't wait for another upload! It's freaking awesome! 
                                    
                                    Thanks for the critique! I haven't written a lot of perfect stories, and I'm only fourteen so they'll be a lot of mistakes, but I'm working as hard as I can! I love writing, and I don't want to do anything else in my life! Critiquing helps me build more knowledge to become a better writer, so your honest opnion is helping me a lot! Thank you so much!
@Equanimity Thank you! I do hope you continue with Dear Mommy! I loved it, and can't wait for another upload! It's freaking awesome! 
                                    
                                    Thanks for the critique! I haven't written a lot of perfect stories, and I'm only fourteen so they'll be a lot of mistakes, but I'm working as hard as I can! I love writing, and I don't want to do anything else in my life! Critiquing helps me build more knowledge to become a better writer, so your honest opnion is helping me a lot! Thank you so much!
@Equanimity Thank you! I do hope you continue with Dear Mommy! I loved it, and can't wait for another upload! It's freaking awesome! 
                                    
                                    Thanks for the critique! I haven't written a lot of perfect stories, and I'm only fourteen so they'll be a lot of mistakes, but I'm working as hard as I can! I love writing, and I don't want to do anything else in my life! Critiquing helps me build more knowledge to become a better writer, so your honest opnion is helping me a lot! Thank you so much!
@Equanimity Thank you! I do hope you continue with Dear Mommy! I loved it, and can't wait for another upload! It's freaking awesome! 
                                    
                                    Thanks for the critique! I haven't written a lot of perfect stories, and I'm only fourteen so they'll be a lot of mistakes, but I'm working as hard as I can! I love writing, and I don't want to do anything else in my life! Critiquing helps me build more knowledge to become a better writer, so your honest opnion is helping me a lot! Thank you so much!