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Soft like Pillows

Soft like Pillows

1.3K Reads 48 Votes 1 Part Story
MommyMagic By MommyMagic Completed

A very slow growing collection of poetry inspired by a variety of writing prompts

jamilla_ jamilla_ Jan 07, 2014
I quite like this, very sweet and soft like I read it as a whisper. I loved the repetition and how it just fits! Indeed my mommy is soft like pillows which is perfect for the hugging!
Achu2911 Achu2911 Jun 21, 2013
I can easily relate to this. Your poetry is very gentle yet mature. In limited lines, you have displayed many emotions.  At one point of time,  I too used to write them and I still have a soft spot for them.
TheDivineMissM TheDivineMissM May 14, 2012
I'm not much for poetry, but I absolutely adored this <3 The description really stood out for me, and I just had to read it. Well done on a beautifull, completely cliche-free work of art =)
jamilla_ jamilla_ Feb 19, 2012
i loved this! absolutely great, the poem flowed so smoothly and i imagined that it was just whispered you know? Softly, slowly. the second verse was my favourite, reminded me of my mom.
belugagirl belugagirl Nov 30, 2011
I also quite liked the sbutle sexuality of the last stanza, very understated and mature.
belugagirl belugagirl Nov 30, 2011
I really liked how you used contrasting words, words that had hard sounds to them, with softer connotations.