Homegrown Sweethearts

Homegrown Sweethearts

1.1K Reads 24 Votes 3 Part Story
Henriette By spikkelchicken Updated Jun 20, 2011

Laura spends her summer holiday after her final year of high school looking after a friend's farm.  Planning her trip to Europe, she does not want to form any attachments, but then she meets Christopher, the annoying yet sexy cousin who doesn't believe her capable of looking after the farm. Will she give in to the force of love or will she stand strong and go to Europe and on to the rest of her life, unhindered by the chains of love?

thousandfallenskies thousandfallenskies Mar 31, 2013
There are a few grammar errors, but it's not a big deal. I think you have a unique style of writing. I like it :)
ivoryeyes ivoryeyes Aug 11, 2011
You know the first page took me soo long to read, it was a little tiring, the second one was great and the third one too.. I actually like Laura,..and your story is good miss
valerice213 valerice213 Jun 29, 2011
I am really looking impressed with your ability to have a it flows so well. Reading this makes me realize what you were saying in the my review. 
                              
                              As far as the story this is good, I like to be able to visualize the story and you did that well. Must read on!!!!! Again 3rd person very impressive!
help-me-think-of-one help-me-think-of-one Apr 20, 2011
It's hard to pull of a 3rd perspective story, but I think you've done a great job. The way you describe your character's feelings and surroundings really stand out from the rest of the stories here, and that's really good to see. Well done. :)
purplegirl14 purplegirl14 Mar 04, 2011
Good idea. It's well written, there are just a few mistakes. Read over it and you'll be fine. Good job!
MidNightsRose MidNightsRose Mar 03, 2011
This is a great story I love it:)  it reminds me of Julia Andrews mandy in some ways and it's a great book also so keep up the good work :)