Concrete Angel (Unedited version) ✔️

Concrete Angel (Unedited version) ✔️

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Samantha Jayne By SamanthaJayne_x Completed

Alyssa has been living in silence for many years, her step-father has been abusing her and her mother. He abuses them sexually, emotionally and mentally. Alyssa keeps it a secret that he sexually abuses her she does it to protect her younger sister Addison from him. Jason Hudson the school bad boys sees her getting abused by him when he picks her up early from school. For him this too close for home and will do anything to make sure that history for him would never repeat itself. Can Jason save Alyssa and Addison before it's too late?

  • abuse
  • angel
  • angry
  • baby
  • boyfriend
  • broken
  • bruises
  • coma
  • concrete
  • family
  • parents
  • past
  • saving
  • school
  • sister
  • social
  • worried
LizzyMidford LizzyMidford Jun 12, 2014
I have a dark mi.d, so I'm just thinking "I WOULD KILL HIM IN HIS SLEEP! SHOW THE COPS THE BRUISES AND SAY IT WAS SELF DEFENSE!"
LizzyMidford LizzyMidford Jun 12, 2014
I love how different people see the song differently. My story Concrete Angel is almost 100% different!
AmeliaFire AmeliaFire Jun 02, 2013
Concrete angel is one of my favorite songs.... Can't wait to start reading your book!
xsmiley24 xsmiley24 May 09, 2013
Wow, I remember when my friend showed me the music video for this song, it was so sad that I ended up crying. (this was 3 years ago) and now I can't even watch the whole video without bursting into tears because it brings sad memories ... Btw, great start xxx
SamanthaJayne_x SamanthaJayne_x Apr 09, 2013
@Luvulikeanangel What is there really to get? It's a story about abuse, two different people coming together and helping. It's not that complicated.
GabbyJaz GabbyJaz Apr 03, 2013
@Luvulikeanangel Well, if you don't like them, there is always the option to not read :P