The Chasing Dream

The Chasing Dream

836 Reads 16 Votes 5 Part Story
Nicole By khstar Updated May 26, 2012

A set of twins has been on the run from a crazed organization for as long as they can remember. Hopping from town to town with the protection of a secret govorment group is anything but fun. Not only are they missing out on friends their missing out on life. Valarie has been unable to trust anyone but her sister, even their life long body gaurd, Jason. Jennifer means the world to Valarie and she'll do eveything in her power to protect her sister. But if the organization catches them again there's no telling what they'll do.

Ben and Vincet seem to be living the high life as of late. Dispite the fact that they grew up as orpahns and there's an organization bent on capturing them; their pretty happy. Having their own little "family" and finally being able to settle down for a change has lifted a heavy weight off of each of the brothers. After the arrival of a strange girl named Valarie; the group will have to seriously think about their future or be broken apart again and up for the taking by the organization.

  • ben
  • control
  • family
  • gatekeeper
  • jason
  • jennifer
  • mind
  • powers
  • sci-fi
  • survial
  • survival
  • time-travel
  • twins
  • valarie
khstar khstar Mar 08, 2011
@xxfrozentearzxx So k YD it'll still be here waiting for you YD
AhaItsAudrey AhaItsAudrey Mar 08, 2011
Seems pretty good, I don`t have time to read it today though.
khstar khstar Mar 06, 2011
@Youngappreticerabbit Probably not ^^'' truth is i wrote the first of this maybe a year ago. =_= its bad but i suck at editing my stuff but i promise right now i'm going to go over it and try and change some stuff
Youngappreticerabbit Youngappreticerabbit Mar 06, 2011
Very good the dialouge in the beginning kind of confused because I didn't know waz saying what...good other wise...though was it really nesassary to cuss that much... :) voting and continuing
khstar khstar Mar 05, 2011
@BlackHearts Ah yes I was trying to stay away from that I think I'm doing a better job of doing it now ^^ thanks
- - Mar 05, 2011
really good and nice vocab. Just one thing, when someone says something try not to use the characters reaction after the speech because then it looks like they are saying it (i'm not good at explaining sorry) its good and I voted