Everyone needs to express themselves somehow; through a song, a story, a letter, a diary, a poem, anything. This is me expressing who I am and the thoughts that run through my head in a unique way. Through the simple rhymes of a dreamer.
@daisymadi: Wow, Madi... My mind is blown xD Those kick butt! Mine suck compare to yours xDD
@Shaycoal Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it! I will try to change that though, thanks for pointing it out. :D And I'm glad you like it! I try my best. <3
:) It's pretty good... But sometimes you're repetitive, like in the second stanza. You say "when you've gone" and then "you've still left me", too. maybe change that one a bit? Anyway, I like the last stanza a lot :)