Oops

Oops

37K Reads 631 Votes 21 Part Story
Jasmine By CinderScoria Completed

World famous rockstar Rocky Nelson has just been kidnapped by two girls who really don't know what they're doing, while his brothers hire an idiot detective to track him down. Escaping should be easy, except for the tiny fact that he may or may not have developed a whacko sort of Stockholm Syndrome on Maya, the "leader", and the fact that gang members keep popping up and trying to kidnap him from his kidnappers. Just why would a ninteen-year-old young woman abduct a rockstar? What is really going on behind his kidnapping? And why is it that the bad guy in the story... might not be so bad after all?

CinderScoria CinderScoria Jun 15, 2011
@XundecidedX Hehe thanks, I take pride in saying I'm a grammatically correct teenager. I'm planning on re-doing this entire chapter, though, haha. Thanks for the vote and the comment!
XundecidedX XundecidedX Jun 15, 2011
I'm happily surprised at the clean grammar and good organization of the story. It's very cohesive. You do well at showing instead of telling as well. You deserve my vote. I'm adding to my library so I can finish it later. 
CinderScoria CinderScoria Jun 14, 2011
@writerswrite Oh my goodness thanks! Lol glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment!
writerswrite writerswrite Jun 14, 2011
Totally adding this to my library as I don't have the time to read the whole thing in one setting. And reading this first page? Totally interested in reading more! Fanning, voting, and all that :)
CinderScoria CinderScoria May 26, 2011
@MissSega Lol gosh! I'm glad you like it so much! Yeah I'm a simple person. xD This is actually almost done, few chapters left, pretty much! Thanks for the fan/comments/vote!
MissSega MissSega May 26, 2011
i'M LIKE SOOOOOOOOO GONNA FAN YOU CHICA. i really like the way you write. It so simple to read. I wanted to call my character Rocky but my boyfriend said it was too common. i really enjoyed reading it bc i wasn't pointing at the screen losing my spot all the time. VOTE