~Eden~

~Eden~

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TJMadelynn By TJMadelynn Updated Feb 28, 2011

Temptation is nothing more than promiscuous intent, dancing off the tongue of a forbidden lover~


Unbind my chains and release my flesh to entwine me with your kisses which bind. Search out my urgency of secret tears, which rain forth from my readied vine. Swim within my scent of a garden pure- and replenish my harvest, forgotten -For these are the moments when lust learns of love, to inhale the beauty of ancient blossoms.

 Anticipation is the servant of need, a necessity tasted before the storm. This amorous cup can only be held, by the master who dares to implore. 

 A touch which sweeps across the horizon of a meadow untouched, yet lays in wait -is the very breath captured within a breeze so warm and sweet, that surrenders my earth with haste.

 Fall upon my unclaimed splendor, and bring forth my desire to her knees -so I shall ravish the seduction of your name, and taste of  temptations' release!

 Remember not my whispered name, nor my eyes which held your reason. For I have flo...

  • passion
  • sensual
  • spiritual
OwensMartin OwensMartin May 19, 2012
This is really very good. I wish i could write like this! It has such a John Donne flavor, and he's one of my all time favs. I would be interested to know, were you inspired by him when you wrote this? I voted for this, by the way. really interesting and beautiful work.
TJMadelynn TJMadelynn Mar 03, 2011
@WordSlinger When I posted this poem, I was hoping for a comment like this one-! I love this. Thank you John. As you know,. this poem wrote itself, and really does have strength within the message. Thank you always-, you know ,lol
Kim1617 Kim1617 Mar 02, 2011
This is clearly passionate and sensual - but there is also a slight gothic undertone - not dark, simply gothic. Perhaps its the phrasing? I love it, TJMaddi - just a wonderful piece of prose dedicated to our natural sensuality - voted!
stridermarcusjones stridermarcusjones Mar 01, 2011
Sweet, sensual passion..succulent body scents blowing from the garden of ancient Babylon. Poetic! Beautiful! Stunning prose. Voted.
Strongheart Strongheart Mar 01, 2011
Maddi again  such  beauty and  passion  you have  graced us with 
sevenseventy sevenseventy Feb 28, 2011
this is powerful and tantilizing.. pure suduction of words. I strive to write as well as you.