Mystic Circle

Mystic Circle

849 Reads 20 Votes 5 Part Story
JMH By TheRedBloodContent Updated Aug 30, 2011

They are forced to sin. They are forced to kill. And they are forced to die young in order to keep their blood line alive. A conflict that dated back centuries ago...now a group of teenagers have to deal with the magic of their ancestors past. Murder, torture, sadistic love triangles. And Danny, a human, will discover some supernatural things as Halloween approaches...

TheRedBloodContent TheRedBloodContent Sep 01, 2011
@Ezmeralde OH GOSH I missed that!! Well thankyou and I hope you enjoy the book
Ezmeralde Ezmeralde Sep 01, 2011
This is a brilliant begining, it really did honestly get my attention, and I loved it, I'm going to read on for deffo. The only thing i could spot is that your missing a speech mark at the end the witches dialouge.
TheRedBloodContent TheRedBloodContent Mar 16, 2011
@greenwriter Yeah, I'm glad it caught your attention, and I will be sure to go over my work again AND redo the things I was careless with...
greenwriter greenwriter Mar 16, 2011
Okay, this first page caught my attention alright. Just a bit of typo and spelling errors but that's alright. 
TheRedBloodContent TheRedBloodContent Mar 16, 2011
@emilyrb  Thank you, it is so nice to get a logical view of the story and I how I did the dialogue. I sincerely hope you would promote me and continue to read on. Again, thank you.
                              
                              Sincerely,
                              JMH
TheRedBloodContent TheRedBloodContent Mar 16, 2011
@Mgoose2 thank u and that tells me that you are actually reading it...