A boy and his sister are abused and oppressed by their family. THey've always wondered what it would be like to have an adventure and be free. little do they know that they're about to be put into the adventure of their life.
@PenelopeRainbow hey buddy girly....? no thats great! critique is what iw ant. i can understand that cause not everyone enjoys the same thing. plz keep reading adn don't forget to vote if you like it! -writerbird
HEY!! This is really odd all my votes disappeared and I had to re-vote like every chapter WTH??? LOL
@MissDawson12 thnk you! really? awesome! break up? thnx for voting!!!!
@laughingtides97 thnk you!!! really? he is my all time favorite author so i will take that as the best compliment i could be given :)) ik... thnk you!!! plz keep reading! lol
Your chapters are really clumped up you should make sure that the paragraphs are diferent. but no worries, the story is good!!!
This was very compelling and professionally written! I got so dragged into it lol. Excellent work :D