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Whistling Down the Sky

Whistling Down the Sky

645 Reads 36 Votes 2 Part Story
Hyacinth Jin By HyacinthJin Updated Apr 23, 2014

In the City on a Hill, a nothing boy and a fairy girl find each other under the starry skyline, before losing each other in the midst of a crowd. But this ain't just another sappy love story. It's about university protests and forgotten murder, about a boy's vow for revenge and how that dream turned to nothing but hyacinth dust. Mafia turf wars and the people staging them, the po-po gettin' beatin' up and girl scout cookies that you just can't stop chugging. But see, this show's not just about who says what - it's about the paths that cross and the peeps who can't seem to die. And you know - that nothing boy really was something.

HyacinthJin HyacinthJin May 26, 2014
@seawaneka Thank you so very much for your comment! I was waiting for someone to call it at least semi-poetic! :D
sandiwardbooks sandiwardbooks May 26, 2014
This is really interesting.  It reads like a poem.  Your language is really vivid and pulls the reader in!
JackieBuckle JackieBuckle May 23, 2014
Very moving story that paints a strong picture in the readers mind. Keep it up :-)
monteiths monteiths May 17, 2014
I like how you start the story. The first sentence caught my attention, and it totally sets the mood. I'm curious about Flynn, and I can't wait to read more!
EmmaLainge EmmaLainge May 11, 2014
Unusual start with an interesting concept. I look forward to seeing where you take this.
seragakily seragakily May 03, 2014
I've never came across a fairy story either but this is interesting.