A lot can change in one night. Just ask Tanya. (More to come when I post the next few chapters. Don't want to give it away)
I'm interested to see who the men are and what they want. You have a keen ability to create suspense and keep readers interested. I have no doubt this will be a great story. Voted.
Thanks all! I think I'll try to go back tonight and add more details in.
A good start, although some more description would be good to add. The ending definitely leaves the readers wanting more, which is good. So far, nice work! Keep writing (:
Hmmm, where to start?
Oh I know!! THAT WAS AMAZING :) I love suspense novels &&& it was amazing :) I didn't really think anything was wrong with it... :) I am definitly going to follow this novel to the very end :)