District Two

District Two

10 Part Story 896 Reads 43 Votes
Jules By Stayingforeveryoung1 Updated Nov 11, 2012

Betrayed that's how it felt, seeing him almost kill me. You've never felt betrayal before believe me its like a monster eating you from the inside causing you to hate and hate only to hate.

RueWriter RueWriter Aug 14, 2012 04:58AM
Awesome!
                              Some advice- Maybe take more time to develop the characters and their thoughts. It's a little rushed.