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Discarded Beginnings to City of Slaves

Discarded Beginnings to City of Slaves

281 Reads 23 Votes 3 Part Story
Abby By AbbyBabble Updated Nov 29, 2016

From Fall 2016 onwards, I'm posting my novel"City of Slaves" here on Wattpad. You'll find it under my profile.

These are my various attempts to create the perfect first chapter for that novel.

LediaDarrow LediaDarrow Mar 22, 2016
You have an excellent way with words. The story is somewhat on the dark side, but you have pulled me in quite skillfully. Please continue to share your experience.
_Jaesthetic _Jaesthetic May 05, 2016
I won't stop omg!!!! 😭. This book is so perfect <3. Ride till the end. This book must reach a mill!!!! Omg!
AlexAnkarr AlexAnkarr Oct 04, 2016
This is good, but the cuts and streamlining of the final version do improve it.
Devyn_LeAnn Devyn_LeAnn Apr 26, 2016
Wow, your writing is so clear and beautiful. I haven't seen anyone put words together the way you do and it's so refreshing. I can't wait to read the rest of this.