Love And Violence

Love And Violence

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Illy By LAXBabe10 Updated Dec 18, 2015

The normalcies of a teenage life are all Arianna dreamt of her entire life. Being the daughter of a successful CEO and a world-renowned supermodel/actress/singer. Despite the fame Ari remains a free spirited teen with a wild heart. Her fairytale takes an exciting turn when at 17 she discovers she is betrothed to a handsome stranger Aiden; only to find he is not who he seems to be, but neither is she. His cold, stoic demeanor and her fiery personality make for an epic love story, butWhat happens when Aiden's dark life puts Ari in the cross hairs? Will they share a novel worthy love story or will it implode dramatically? When a good girl with unfathomable secrets is forced to be with a man with a clandestine past, tensions rise as they tread the thin line between love and hate, but we all know, all is fair in love and war.

LAXBabe10 LAXBabe10 Dec 05, 2011
@AvengingAngel thanks for ure suggestions im gonna rewrite it anyways its wayy too old
LAXBabe10 LAXBabe10 Dec 03, 2011
@IBreakHearts yeah thanks sooo much i think ill re write it because honestly this is sooo ancient
LAXBabe10 LAXBabe10 Dec 03, 2011
@KingLeonidas thanks omg i love ure sn totally awesome...seems like ure looking 4 love ure highness
LAXBabe10 LAXBabe10 Dec 03, 2011
@imaginewriterlove thank you for your suggestions i began writting this story like in 7th grade im now a sophmore so my writting has evolved but otherwise thanks soo much u have some sense unlike other ppl on wattpad
imaginewriterlove imaginewriterlove Dec 03, 2011
a little more descriptions? other than that, great storyy! all it needs is some more flow and you've got yourself a really good first story! nicely written!
AVYofficial AVYofficial Dec 03, 2011
Interesting read. I like your use of language. Your grammar and punctuation was good. You are a talented writer, keep doing what you're doing. ;)