A Change in Life (Furry Story/Boy x Boy)

A Change in Life (Furry Story/Boy x Boy)

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XNeonWolfX By XNeonWolfX Updated Mar 04, 2016

Returning back to school from a long holiday, Caleb, a fairly large German Shepherd, is still a bit troubled by school. But on the first day back, he's met with a smaller wolf by the name of Dean. Furthermore, it looks like the wolf was gay and had been developing a crush on him... But does he return the wolf's love?

  • boyxboy
  • furries
  • furry
  • gay
  • mature
  • teen
Why didn't you make the name of this chapter "Disclaimer, Recommendations, and POV"?
RomanPowers RomanPowers May 17
I'd suggest you change it to "Unfortunately, the serene morning peace was shattered by an agitated scream that reverberated through the house."
                              
                              Hope that's not too purple-proseish.
I would have wrote "...ears twitched again...", but, whatever work.
A lot of repetition.  This should be condensed.  Good so far tho
Soundbyt3 Soundbyt3 Apr 24
Could it be a slip of the imaginary tongue our is he becoming bi find out next time on Dragon ba- no... Find out next time on naru- no..... Find out next time on a change in life (finally)
Really repetitive, and verb tense is changed a bit, but it still paints a nice picture.