A Change in Life (Furry Story/Boy x Boy)

A Change in Life (Furry Story/Boy x Boy)

129K Reads 3.1K Votes 33 Part Story
XNeonWolfX By XNeonWolfX Updated Mar 04, 2016

Returning back to school from a long holiday, Caleb, a fairly large German Shepherd, is still a bit troubled by school. But on the first day back, he's met with a smaller wolf by the name of Dean. Furthermore, it looks like the wolf was gay and had been developing a crush on him... But does he return the wolf's love?

  • boyxboy
  • furries
  • furry
  • gay
  • mature
  • teen
Fimdir_The_Fox Fimdir_The_Fox Aug 07, 2017
Why didn't you make the name of this chapter "Disclaimer, Recommendations, and POV"?
RomanPowers RomanPowers May 17, 2017
I'd suggest you change it to "Unfortunately, the serene morning peace was shattered by an agitated scream that reverberated through the house."
                              
                              Hope that's not too purple-proseish.
RavenChaser120 RavenChaser120 Sep 23, 2017
I would have wrote "...ears twitched again...", but, whatever work.
Shadowstar1346 Shadowstar1346 Sep 14, 2017
A lot of repetition.  This should be condensed.  Good so far tho
weirdfloofy weirdfloofy Apr 24, 2017
Could it be a slip of the imaginary tongue our is he becoming bi find out next time on Dragon ba- no... Find out next time on naru- no..... Find out next time on a change in life (finally)
RavenChaser120 RavenChaser120 Sep 23, 2017
Really repetitive, and verb tense is changed a bit, but it still paints a nice picture.