I don't need your God

I don't need your God

18 Part Story 281K Reads 4.5K Votes
Sinaidkincaid16 By Sinaidkincaid16 Completed

Josh Mitchell was a Preacher's Son.  He tried to live his life as a morally upstanding young boy.  He liked being a positive influence to all his friends at school.  Josh found he had a real challenge on his hands when a strikingly beautiful blonde girl joined his school and told him :" I don't need your God"
    
    Josh was taken aback.  He started questioning his values.  Should he continue serving this God, who allows crime, violence natural disaters to cause division on this beautiful earth?  Why does God not stop all these catastrophes before they cause the harm they do?

This book is very interesting! I like Kaz's personality, but she calls Josh Preacher Boy too much. Still, there are a few grammatical errors and the story seems a little rushed, but other than all of that, this book is awesome!
This is a good book, but there are a few grammatical errors that you need to fix. But, it's still a great book! :)
smiley_foster smiley_foster Feb 13, 2015 10:29PM
There should be a comma after Kingman and at the end of the quote there should be  period instead
smiley_foster smiley_foster Feb 13, 2015 10:20PM
I was confused how it suddenly skipped from after dinner to school
AdriInda AdriInda Nov 13, 2014 07:05AM
@murdersauce who are to tell me what to believe. i have my beliefs and apparrantly so do you. But that doesnt give you the right to tell Anyone that God doesnt exsist. If he "doesnt exsist" then why you spend your time argueing on the topic?