He will be ours

He will be ours

118K Reads 3.4K Votes 21 Part Story
Kitten By cabith1998 Updated Oct 05, 2017

Sammie is a short boy or man in his senior year. Standing at only 5'4 he's pretty short and hates being reminded of the fact. When his family move to Pennsylvania in the beginning of the year he thinks nothing of it since he usually sticks to himself he only had two friends however when they moved they didn't realize they moved right into the center of a werewolf community. Xavier and his twin Michelangelo are searching for there mate and already now they will have the same one but what they didn't count on was him being a resistant little spitfire. So do you think they can win him over???

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TheCaster369 TheCaster369 Sep 26, 2017
I think this has potential,  but it really needs some punctuation. You didn't mark the ending of most sentences, and the lack of quotation marks is confusing. Also, I don't really know who was speaking most of the time. That said, I think the story is good so far.
Sirdusty Sirdusty Dec 21, 2017
This is a great story plot, however plz do some editing once you complete it
xXfanfics4lifeXx xXfanfics4lifeXx Mar 10, 2017
I'm not trying to disrespect the author but you should check grammar before adding nick name s
Fantasizingscientist Fantasizingscientist Dec 12, 2017
This book is extremely good and I'm trying to be nice but quotation marks would make it better and I know that everyone is saying that but this book is still pretty good and I can still read it without quotations.
saesae03 saesae03 Jan 07
This book is amazing but can you please add quotation maeks ("..")
Rin_Chan7 Rin_Chan7 Oct 15, 2017
This is so confusing, and it needs punctuation bad. I can't understand anything!