He will be ours

He will be ours

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Kitten By cabith1998 Updated Feb 03

Sammie is a short boy or man in his senior year. Standing at only 5'4 he's pretty short and hates being reminded of the fact. When his family move to Pennsylvania in the beginning of the year he thinks nothing of it since he usually sticks to himself he only had two friends however when they moved they didn't realize they moved right into the center of a werewolf community. Xavier and his twin Michelangelo are searching for there mate and already now they will have the same one but what they didn't count on was him being a resistant little spitfire. So do you think they can win him over???

Lissykaye Lissykaye Apr 07
Sounded interesting, but grammar and punctuation is horrible... Can't even force myself to read it
pochipanda pochipanda Jun 06
Can you edit this somehow, i loved the idea of this when i heard about it, but it's kind of hard to read... ☺
shan154 shan154 Mar 05
Well I love your story so I'm going to give us an advice. Try to put " every time someone talked so that people can easily knows who talk
Next time plz add some punctuation marks so I can tell wat there saying and wat there not saying
I didn't get far and I can't read anymore.. it's not good. At least the description was good?..
Fir those that are confused:
                              "Mommy do we have to move."
                              "For the tenth time YES, now get in the car."
                              "Fine but I still don't like this."
                              "Honey, calm down our son just needs time to get used to the idea.
                              "I promise once we get there you'll love it."
                              "Fine."