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He will be ours

He will be ours

100K Reads 2.9K Votes 18 Part Story
Kitten By cabith1998 Updated Feb 03, 2016

Sammie is a short boy or man in his senior year. Standing at only 5'4 he's pretty short and hates being reminded of the fact. When his family move to Pennsylvania in the beginning of the year he thinks nothing of it since he usually sticks to himself he only had two friends however when they moved they didn't realize they moved right into the center of a werewolf community. Xavier and his twin Michelangelo are searching for there mate and already now they will have the same one but what they didn't count on was him being a resistant little spitfire. So do you think they can win him over???

I'm not trying to disrespect the author but you should check grammar before adding nick name s
This is so confusing to read! And I am trying my best! Puntuation marks, space between those speaking, you cant jumble everything together!!
pochipanda pochipanda Jun 06, 2016
Can you edit this somehow, i loved the idea of this when i heard about it, but it's kind of hard to read... ☺
Good book, very interesting plot line. Only piece of advice is to emphasis when someone is talking out loud or in their heads by using ' or ". Sorry, it just gets extremely confusing for the reader.
wolfgirl4548 wolfgirl4548 May 27, 2016
Next time plz add some punctuation marks so I can tell wat there saying and wat there not saying
PrincessBunny5 PrincessBunny5 May 08, 2016
I didn't get far and I can't read anymore.. it's not good. At least the description was good?..