Size Matters

Size Matters

5.3K Reads 54 Votes 4 Part Story
Annie Kay By AnnieKay3 Updated Feb 27, 2011

The human race was like an offering to them. Blood pumping around their large bodies was just too hard to resist. The take over lasted for two and a half weeks. Thats all it took to conquer the world... 
And now they suck human blood the way the humans sucked a Mc Donalds milkshake.

- - Oct 02, 2012
I feel like te begining part of this should be in a movie. With a lo American accent or something....
AnnieKay3 AnnieKay3 Oct 01, 2012
@LiaFanel Haha! Yeah! Fat people! :P And about the same amount of vampires. They aren't a minor species :P
                              
                              You and your British accents!! LOL!!
makeandoffer makeandoffer Mar 05, 2011
i like how you draw your reader in, makes you want to read more!
StorySpinner StorySpinner Mar 03, 2011
Well the starting is extremely captivating...I really like it, I'll move on and read the rest when I'll get the time:) I voted for you.
                              P.s- Don't forget to return the favour...
trishthewriter trishthewriter Mar 03, 2011
I see the potential here, and the beginning line was good. I noticed you were jumping between past and present tense. You should pick one so readers aren't confused. That aside, I like where you seem to be going. Voted. 
Stupid_CupiD Stupid_CupiD Mar 03, 2011
The writing is creative and beautiful; compells you to read more which doesnt really happen in many stories here ! soo GREAT JOB ! Keeep writing voted and am i a fan of the writing :P