Lethal Messages (A Short Story Written in IMs)

Lethal Messages (A Short Story Written in IMs)

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Tiffany By BeforeMarch Completed

While Cassidy is casually IMing her friend Mallory, she receives disturbing news. A girl about their age was found dead in the woods. Her head... sliced off of her body. She was supposedly killed by an escaped prisoner from a mental institution not far away. Horrifying yes. Believable no. As Cassidy make fun of her friend for making up the story, their casual IMs  take a turn for the worst...

elliesphim elliesphim Jun 29, 2011
Did Mallory kill cassidy? or was mallory killed then he came after cassidy?im confused
                              
BeforeMarch BeforeMarch May 21, 2011
@Eleanora yeahs she's dead. That's why Mallory said: what to do with her head. 
BeforeMarch BeforeMarch Mar 15, 2011
@TayMonet95  Thanks! would you tell me what confused you though? I want to know so I could make it better. :) 
taylormonet taylormonet Mar 13, 2011
Nice plot! I was a little confused at the end but that's just because I'm slow! It was like a mini scary movie in my mind! Nice job! Haha "what to do with her head" xD
                              -Taylor
The_Oracle The_Oracle Mar 13, 2011
I got the chills just from reading the end...I must say wow and EPIC and finally...
                              
                              BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!