Avenging Angel

Avenging Angel

1.4K Reads 85 Votes 13 Part Story
Samantha Green By Barbiedoll1 Updated Sep 25, 2012

Would you rather be: (A) A loner; (B) A person with many friends who actually don't like you; (C) A person with true friends???

Kiara Bose has always categorised herself in the third option but fate has chosen something else for her!

Living in a world of illusion created by her friends, she has always been happy until a black spell was caste upon her life!

Unaware of a way to break out of the spell and bring her doomed life back to normal, Kiara tries a thousand ways.

Would fate force her to end up under option (A) or she will be able to find a way out and fight back with the help of her boyfriend  and a mystery caller and ravel the mystery behind!

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Barbiedoll1 Barbiedoll1 Sep 15, 2012
@BlurryWords Thank you so much...its means a lot to me! i assure you that thye upcoming chapters will have more description...Actually i am not that good in describing something but i'll try. Thank you so much!
BlurryWords BlurryWords Sep 14, 2012
I liked this chapter. I really like your plot line, it's very interesting. I'd suggest maybe adding a bit more description in just to really set the scene. Your dialogue was good though, believably written. Overall, good start.
Barbiedoll1 Barbiedoll1 Jul 09, 2012
Thank you so much!!!!
                              i really appreciate it!!!
                              yeah....i need a good editor!!!!
                              i would be glad if you could provide me with one!!!!
                              Thank you so much @Becca304
Barbiedoll1 Barbiedoll1 Jun 13, 2012
@RashiManaktala thank yaar.....i promise i'll upload it soon but before i'll have to wait for a good response!!!!!!!
RashiManaktala RashiManaktala Jun 13, 2012
its a nyc story srishti... d point of views are amazing... m waiting for ur entire story..