She Haunts These Streets (Hiatus)

She Haunts These Streets (Hiatus)

502 Reads 11 Votes 4 Part Story
Olivia By xXSlightlyTwistedXx Updated Mar 17, 2011

Darrel Medina becomes intoxicated with Adeline Linter, a seventeen year old girl with hair the color of a blooming rose and a soul as amicable as her heart. But these traits-her obvious beauty and sweet disposition-is what makes her the target among peers, eventually leading to her own devastating suicide. 

Darrel's life moves on, until he finally decides to record the events that took place between he and Adeline years after their first confrontation in 1952. With a severed heart and consummated mind, Darrel retraces his steps to every event that occurred with Adeline and himself, beginning with their first encounter and ending with Adeline's painful choice, and Darrel's desecrated life.

SwingMyHipsAndGiggle SwingMyHipsAndGiggle Mar 20, 2011
This is really good stuff, your a great writer with great stories
xXSlightlyTwistedXx xXSlightlyTwistedXx Mar 16, 2011
@pemmas Thank you so much! I really appreciate the comment. I worked hard on the writing and vocabulary, and knowing someone as talented as you enjoys it this much, gives me some insane confidence. Thanks so much for reading :)))))