Discovery

Discovery

1.9K Reads 19 Votes 7 Part Story
mohawkguy28@yahoo.com By mohawkguy28 Completed

She woke up cold and in a dark place with no memories of who she is or where she is from. What happened to her? Will she ever know?Will she fix her problems or pursue something different? Will the love that she finds belong to the time that she is destined to be? Who or  what does she chose? Will she chose security, power, or neither? Or will time choose for her.

mohawkguy28 mohawkguy28 Apr 09, 2011
@truenotme thank you.  There is more to come. I am only halfway done with it. I did have a different  description but I reduced it until I can come up with a better one. 
elvionina elvionina Apr 09, 2011
the description was good, but if you had put more imagery it would become alive. Voted!
mohawkguy28 mohawkguy28 Apr 04, 2011
@cookiedough634 sorry it wasn't meant to sound like that..just wanted to emphasize the mystery :)
MissRaRa MissRaRa Apr 02, 2011
wow, this is long! it's really good too, i can't find any major errors, or minor errors for that matter.... :P
AvengedSevenfoldGirl AvengedSevenfoldGirl Apr 02, 2011
wow,,,so far i have read up to the fourth page - i wanted to comment now before i read on to say that this is awesome!!!
                              
                              it has an amazing written style and i think its really good :) *votes*
MajaDiana MajaDiana Mar 30, 2011
@mohawkguy28 It makes sense. however it just seems messy here. But Good that you already know it.