Pleasing Tribes

Pleasing Tribes

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Rosie R By rosiemiracle Completed

"What is your name?"


Nice name. I expected something more though. 

"Want to know mine"


She was quite good at giving simple annoying answers. It was as though she was trying to make me vexed but I will not concede.

"It is Rigen"

"I do not want or need to know"

A very nice dialogue indeed.

"Most women would want to be able to refer to me by it but they cannot. Do you want to know why?"

Her reply was a positive as expected.

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