Hold me back... You will finally find the place where you belong (ON HOLD)

Hold me back... You will finally find the place where you belong (ON HOLD)

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SweetPain96 By SweetPain96 Updated Jul 15, 2011

Riley and her dad have been running away from their past and they are trying to stay safe. Now they have been forced to move to America, where the U.S. Department of Justice offers them protection and her dad helps them solve some crimes too. 

In the beginning Riley never imagined she could find great friends at her new school, but she did and she may even find love for the first time. Would that change her decision to go back to her country? Is love strong enough to left her dreams and goals behind? What will she do? 

Will she finally find the place where she belongs?

  • adventure
  • betrayal
  • dance
  • friends
  • friendship
  • fun
  • halloween
  • hate
  • highschool
  • life
  • loneliness
  • love
  • murder
  • music
  • party
  • police
  • revenge
  • sadness
  • sports
-v_v-andyke -v_v-andyke Aug 21, 2011
haha I read you other story and decided to start reading this one and guess what ?? I love this one too
                              I wish I could write like you.. this looks like an interesting story... I can't wait for you to upload ... please :)
SweetPain96 SweetPain96 Jul 03, 2011
@Synchiropus_splendid Thnx for your comment :)
                              Creating a cast was part of the plan, but finding the actors that match the characters of the story is the hard part... if you have someone in mind let me know.. thanks again... comments are always great!
SweetPain96 SweetPain96 Jul 02, 2011
@Laura_Nicole Thanks for reading this story and I'm glad you liked it :D
sperare sperare Apr 28, 2011
One of my character is called Riley too! Overall good job. :) 
SweetPain96 SweetPain96 Mar 31, 2011
Thanks for your comment... I really appreciate it XD I'd like to read yours too and tell you what I think ;-)
chynajade chynajade Mar 31, 2011
Most interesting and you write well. Care to check out mine? Thanks.