Reality Check

Reality Check

1.7K Reads 31 Votes 4 Part Story
Kenn Johnson By KennJohnson Completed

Jacob Greene is seeing things. After being fired from his job, Jacob returns home to Pickersford, PA, to find that the problems he faces cannot be escaped. In an effort to find the cause of the visions that have haunted and destroyed his friendships, Jacob will come to find the truth behind his world. Part Inception, part The Matrix, Reality Check aims to take how you perceive reality and rip it to shreds. Cover photo is "sleep." by adjustreality @ deviantart.com. Art done by Rachelle Gertz.

Please note that I'm no longer working on this story. Sorry.

KennJohnson KennJohnson Mar 25, 2011
@Dictomion This is exactly why I have trouble describing the plot to people. In my head, it's a very fine line between teasing and spoiling in this particular case.
TKAnez TKAnez Mar 23, 2011
Your writing is very clear and fast pace. Watch out for paragraphs that are too long, though, because it becomes distracting for the reader. All in all, good job~
AvengedSevenfoldGirl AvengedSevenfoldGirl Mar 22, 2011
really REALLY lovethis!!!
                              Its awesome and i can't wait to read on :)
                              *votes*
SarahWesten SarahWesten Mar 22, 2011
Your writing is great, it hooks the reader in very easily and from you description I can see that a wide audience of people could like a story like this. I know that I do. :)
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Heygirl124 Heygirl124 Mar 22, 2011
Love it! I am very surprised, this is wry hood. You are a great writer, keep it up!!! Check out my story Try Me? I think you woul like it. Thanks and dude, keep updating! 
SwingMyHipsAndGiggle SwingMyHipsAndGiggle Mar 03, 2011
this is a really good idea, I can't wait to see what happens