Double bullets./Bulletproof. [ON HOLD!]

Double bullets./Bulletproof. [ON HOLD!]

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audrey;D By coookiemonsterr Updated Aug 06, 2012

Bernedette and Nicolette Willows are highly trained agents. They are sent to high school to complete a mission - how hard could that be? But, it is still high school. What could a team of agents who have never been to school expect? Plus, when all finally goes well, another group of agents enter the school and interrupts their mission, yet again. So, now what?

coookiemonsterr coookiemonsterr Apr 16, 2011
@tianajade thanks for reading :) your comment means a lot :) i hope you'll continue to support my story (:
tianajade tianajade Apr 14, 2011
A good beginning. Some of it could be worded a little better, and make sure you spell out numbers. But other than that, I thought it was a good prologue and the storyline sounds like an interesting one. Nice work, and keep writing! :)
CosmosInChaos CosmosInChaos Mar 02, 2011
You have some punctuation and grammatical errors... but that easily fixable!!! I like how you started it all light! Keep it up! *vomments and continues reading*
coookiemonsterr coookiemonsterr Mar 01, 2011
@taraniamh thanks so much for the comment! and the vote!(: hope you'll continue to support my story(:
taraniamh taraniamh Mar 01, 2011
its alright :) I like the plot and it was funny too. But there's some grammar errors but nothing you couldn't sort out :)
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coookiemonsterr coookiemonsterr Feb 28, 2011
thanks to all the rest of you guys, your comments mean a lot to me :D