The Day I Fell In Love With A Demon

The Day I Fell In Love With A Demon

28.9K Reads 328 Votes 13 Part Story
Lynn By shopaholic889 Completed

(Undergoing Editing) Kendra's 16th birthday is here. For most girls that means a party, shopping, and a ton of presents.  For Kendra, it means the death of her best friend, falling in love, and finding someone she never expected to see again.  Will she ever except the truth about the boy she's falling in love with?

shopaholic889 shopaholic889 Jul 08, 2011
@wa7237 I'm not from Arizona, but I LOVE it there and have family/friends there!  I love the desert as a setting! 
foxifae foxifae Jun 21, 2011
I liked the flow of this and it was well written apart from some full stops that should be commas before the speech tags. An intriguing start. xx
_Chez_ _Chez_ Jun 14, 2011
Whew that was intense *wipes sweat from forehead* wow this is a really awesome chappie and I can't wait to read the rest!!!
Singbobo Singbobo Jun 13, 2011
Wow, nice first chapter, they dont call murders exciting for nothing!! Great grammar, nothing was too noticable. great start! ;)
jeswift711 jeswift711 Jun 13, 2011
Well was an intense first chapter. Good grabber though, already throwing your readers into the action.
JusLuvLyf JusLuvLyf Jun 13, 2011
Interesting that both our stories have someone being murdered inthe first chapter. I feel bad for kendra that must really be hard to deal with. I like this chapter it kept me interesed and makes me want to continue reading. I do not see any mistakes.  Voted :)