My Killer

My Killer

316 Reads 9 Votes 1 Part Story
Lauren By itslaauraan Updated Feb 27, 2011

When seventeen year old, Lily Morris goes onto a back road in her small town late at night to try and prove her friends wrong. But, she turns out dead. So much for proving her friends wrong. Lily's soul gets stuck on the earth to try and find the serial killer who killed her and many more people in her town. But on the way, she ends up falling in love with a human boy. What will they do at all costs to find the serial killer and be together?

chris2fer chris2fer Sep 26, 2011
wow its a great story. you should really check out my poems thanx
DeeJB11 DeeJB11 Mar 09, 2011
This. This is great. The descriptions are vivid and not overbearing. I like your righting style too, it makes everything feel realistic. Especially considering the fact that at the end the person is looking over their body. 
galwithgall galwithgall Mar 09, 2011
Nice beginning!
                              Uhh...title suggestions? Hm, I'm pretty bad at those, but and I'm not entirely sure where you're going with this yet, but here are a few you might consider:
                              Killer
                              Born to Be Dead
                              A Stuck Soul
                              
                              uhh. yeah, you probably don't want to use those.
                              But good luck with your story!