Vanilla Dipped In Chocolate

Vanilla Dipped In Chocolate

39 Part Story 946K Reads 21.1K Votes
Ramona Morris By MonaChiedu Completed

¦Cassandra Payne is one of the best pastry chefs on the West Coast. While in the middle of the  "Wedding Madness Month", her busiest time of the year, she meets a tall mysterious stranger who regularly visits her store. He is gorgeous but not her usual type.
     
     He may be handsome and charming but he's also white.
    
    Evan Gillies has a sweet tooth. The beautiful, curvy baker doesn't seem to be aware of his existance, all she wants to do is bake.
     
    But  the two are soon drawn together by a force so strong that the two have no control of the results.
    
    Maybe chocolate and vanilla do mix

Shy_Sweetness Shy_Sweetness May 21, 2015 02:59AM
your way of writing is weird. not bad. it's just that first it's first person then it's third person. 
whispers2u whispers2u Apr 23, 2015 12:33AM
just found @MonaChiedu pls fix the pov. it changes so frequently , even in the midst of a sentence. this seems like a good book but with all the mistakes from spelling, to punctuation, its hard to enjoy
andrine09 andrine09 Jul 31, 2014 03:34PM
Yum.. I love me anything sweet lol .. I enjoyed this prologue looking forward to the twists and turns yet to come.
I can tell already me and you is gone be good friends!  *Taystee voice*
tayyaba1404 tayyaba1404 Jul 15, 2014 04:18AM
contemplating who would be more frighting bleibers or directioners 0.0
Ronnie_Lov3 Ronnie_Lov3 Dec 19, 2013 02:54AM
why do you keep changing print of views it's really confusing. Is the story being narrated or is Cassandra telling the story?