Vanilla Dipped In Chocolate

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Ramona Morris By MonaChiedu Completed
¦Cassandra Payne is one of the best pastry chefs on the West Coast. While in the middle of the  "Wedding Madness Month", her busiest time of the year, she meets a tall mysterious stranger who regularly visits her store. He is gorgeous but not her usual type.
     He may be handsome and charming but he's also white.
    Evan Gillies has a sweet tooth. The beautiful, curvy baker doesn't seem to be aware of his existance, all she wants to do is bake.
    But  the two are soon drawn together by a force so strong that the two have no control of the results.
    Maybe chocolate and vanilla do mix
your way of writing is weird. not bad. it's just that first it's first person then it's third person. 
just found @MonaChiedu pls fix the pov. it changes so frequently , even in the midst of a sentence. this seems like a good book but with all the mistakes from spelling, to punctuation, its hard to enjoy
@MonaChiedu oh i know :) i didn't mean to offend you or anything just constructive criticism, your book was amazing over all!
Yum.. I love me anything sweet lol .. I enjoyed this prologue looking forward to the twists and turns yet to come.
I can tell already me and you is gone be good friends!  *Taystee voice*
contemplating who would be more frighting bleibers or directioners 0.0