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Breaking Free

Breaking Free

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Sara By Blossom03 Updated Sep 17, 2011

After an unexpected surprise 17 year old Lily is forced to move from her hometown Utah to go live with with her dad, who she hasn't seen since she was 6. She believes the worst that could happen is having to leave behind her loved ones in Utah, but she's in for another surprise when she finds out where she's moving, and an even bigger surprise when she starts exploring the tough streets. Soon she finds herself being caught in something she can't get out of. This just goes to show that life's full if surprises, and Lily's starting to get really sick of them.

Blossom03 Blossom03 Mar 29, 2011
@LaneyLouAdams  Oh really? Wow that's awesome! I've never been in Utah myself so I hope I did okay, I just always pictured what it would be like to live there so that's where I started my stories setting :)
LaneyLouAdams LaneyLouAdams Mar 10, 2011
I lived in Utah for four amazing years, so I consider it be one of my "homes." my father is in the military, so we move around alot. But I was just skimming along descriptions, saw the word Utah, and clicked. Seems totally worth it! I really like this story!
                              Love, Laney Lou Adams
Ilovemickey95 Ilovemickey95 Feb 27, 2011
Yay I like it so far! You should add more soon (; I hope you're a better updater than me! Hahah(: