Population Relocation(ON HOLD!)

Population Relocation(ON HOLD!)

384 Reads 11 Votes 6 Part Story
Irissa By Irissa Updated Aug 24, 2012

A new continent was created to decrease the populations in America. a young adult named Samantha aka Charlie living in Spokane WA. gets abducted by the governess and is forced to live on the continent called Tryn.
when she gets there she finds it is like how the pilgrims lived, simple.
only one problem other countries shipped all of their criminals there and they hate Americans. so they set up camps were the Americans are tortured and sometimes murdered. Samantha gets imprisoned there.

TheMageBranwen TheMageBranwen Dec 01, 2013
Wow. Just WOW. You've caught my interest. I can't wait to read the rest when I get around to it.
Irissa Irissa Feb 04, 2012
@mimigray yeah i kind of went on a rant in a few parts and i totally agree i need to edit it thank you so much for reading my story and i will totally make it better for every one =)
CastielFan CastielFan Jan 27, 2012
This was a little bit confusing in some areas, maybe it would help if you made the paragraphs smaller? However, this is an interesting idea. I can't wait to see where you go with this!
Neo200120018 Neo200120018 Oct 13, 2011
Interesting concept was confusing in bits, but  you have a great vocab and writing style so keep it up!
Irissa Irissa Oct 13, 2011
@FavaxDaxBBN so please read the next chapter!!! It might be better than this one =/ i hope hahaXD
Irissa Irissa Oct 13, 2011
@FavaxDaxBBN oh sorry =( i didnt mean for it to drag on... the next chapter has more emotion and dialogue, i just wanted to see what people thought so i could make it a better story and thank you for voting =) i will try and make my story better!