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souls as black as suits.

souls as black as suits.

980 Reads 43 Votes 7 Part Story
icefyra By icefyra Updated Jun 15, 2011

(drug use,foul lango)
 follow damon a 18 yr old close to his 19 birthday. discovers that he might not even be human and his whole life may have been a lie.  
ps votes r nice. so r fans but the best r comments
ENJOY MORTAL  \m/ (*_*) \m/

Leigh19 Leigh19 May 10, 2010
Aww I used to do that when I smoked! I like brown eyes and glasses :)
newhope newhope Apr 24, 2010
So, The grammar and punctuation are so much better in this one! (Oh, I am sounding like my English professor.) Keep going. You are going to get to the point you almost don't even have to think about it. :D 
                              I really enjoy where the plot is headed. I like that it is original! 
Abii-x Abii-x Apr 18, 2010
it is great!
                              just maybe spilt it into more paragraphs?
                              Love it so far though!
                              Keep writing!
icefyra icefyra Apr 18, 2010
um first public writing normaly now one gets to read wat i write..  well hope u like it so far...