(drug use,foul lango)
follow damon a 18 yr old close to his 19 birthday. discovers that he might not even be human and his whole life may have been a lie.
ps votes r nice. so r fans but the best r comments
ENJOY MORTAL \m/ (*_*) \m/
Aww I used to do that when I smoked! I like brown eyes and glasses :)
So, The grammar and punctuation are so much better in this one! (Oh, I am sounding like my English professor.) Keep going. You are going to get to the point you almost don't even have to think about it. :D
I really enjoy where the plot is headed. I like that it is original!
it is great!
just maybe spilt it into more paragraphs?
Love it so far though!
um first public writing normaly now one gets to read wat i write.. well hope u like it so far...