souls as black as suits.

souls as black as suits.

980 Reads 43 Votes 7 Part Story
icefyra By icefyra Updated Jun 15, 2011

(drug use,foul lango)
 follow damon a 18 yr old close to his 19 birthday. discovers that he might not even be human and his whole life may have been a lie.  
--ice 
ps votes r nice. so r fans but the best r comments
ENJOY MORTAL  \m/ (*_*) \m/

Leigh19 Leigh19 May 10, 2010
Aww I used to do that when I smoked! I like brown eyes and glasses :)
newhope newhope Apr 24, 2010
So, The grammar and punctuation are so much better in this one! (Oh, I am sounding like my English professor.) Keep going. You are going to get to the point you almost don't even have to think about it. :D 
                              
                              I really enjoy where the plot is headed. I like that it is original! 
Abii-x Abii-x Apr 18, 2010
it is great!
                              just maybe spilt it into more paragraphs?
                              :P
                              Love it so far though!
                              Keep writing!
                              
                              Abi-x
icefyra icefyra Apr 18, 2010
um first public writing normaly now one gets to read wat i write..  well hope u like it so far...